Pretty good, but...
Which vote do you pick for "umm........ what?"
Pretty good, but...
Which vote do you pick for "umm........ what?"
Wow.
This is an amazing short, and it sounds like retro Kirby, which is NOT a bad thing (in my opinion, retro Kirby's just as good as retro Megaman). keep making em'.
hey guys! Guess what!...
... I just realized that he's a fucking asshole!
woah
... and so it began.
I have to admit I didn't think that there was much to the stories I saw in thumbnails across NG, but after I saw 'the last of the Dashkin" I just HAD to see the rest of them. EPIC story, dude; and with this kind of storywriting and worldcrafting, there's just NO WAY in a FROZEN HELL that you won't become a film director. But if you ask me, you should go with a series- there's just so much to show about BrackenWood, and look at what happened to the fourth "Harry Potter" book when it went into film: it went down the poop-chute with cutbacks, edits, and screentime compressions.
as to the part with the witch, agonylord, the Dashkin was an asshole, so she used water magic on him. duh.
hunh... man
poor guy <:( [sympathetic]
heh...heh.
OOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooSHIIIIIIIIITTTT TT! *bump* COL(chuckled out loud)
hmm..
heheh... I guess it's okay...
You haaaad to do it, didn't you?
You just had to end it with that kinda grabass and ruin it, hunh?
LAME!
Other than that, great story! Which is all that saved you from a score of 3.
HAAAAAA
nice
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